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Monday 4 November 2013

Writing Test Narrative.

Planning:
Characters Ben , Mike, Simon and sam.
The problem is that it looks to old and they need to plant some flowers.
It solved that some people come and help Mike, Ben Simon and Sam plant.

Start Writing Here:
I heard a whisper but no one was there a person was whispering but they didn’t know who it was because they couldn't see that person that was whispering. When the person was whispering they thought it was a bird but it was not a bird it was a person but the won’t there.

That person  was whispering to loud that Ben, Mike, Sam and Simon could hear them from outside because they were talking about something about that they need to built the shed but they  need some people to come and help plant some flowers around the shed cause the shed is really old.

Ben, Mike, Simon and Sam needed to think because they are going to do a big job by looking for some people to come and help them plant some flowers around the shed. While they are looking for some People to come and help they upset that they might not find anyone at all.

Mike and Sam are really sad because they might not get any people to help them get the shed well done and clean up because they can’t find any one at all. As they were sad they just said to them self we can do this by our self becauses we can’t find any one at all so lets do this our self.

As they finish pulling the grass, taking out old things from the shed, painting the shed and getting new fence they had some rest for tomorrow because they have to take down the shed and built it again lots of things got to do that day. While they were having a rest because it a really HUGE day.

Mike, Sam, Ben and Simon woke up at 5:00 o'clock in the morning  because they had to do a lot of things to get done they worked and worked as hard as they could as they were working they heard something coming from the other side of the shed they walked closer and closer it was a truck it was crashing down the shed.I heard a whisper but no one was there a person was whispering but they didn’t know who it was because they couldn't see that person that was whispering.

That person  was whispering to loud that Ben, Mike, Sam and Simon could hear them from outside because they were talking about something about that they need to built the shed but they  need some people to come and help plant some flowers around the shed cause the shed is really old.

Ben, Mike, Simon and Sam needed to think because they are going to do a big job by looking for some people to come and help them plant some flowers around the shed. While they are looking for some People to come and help they upset that they might not find anyone at all.

Mike and Sam are really sad because they might not get any people to help them get the shed well done and clean up because they can’t find any one at all. As they were sad they just said to them self we can do this by our self becauses we can’t find any one at all so lets do this our self.

As they finish pulling the grass, taking out old things from the shed, painting the shed and getting new fence they had some rest for tomorrow because they have to take down the shed and built it again lots of things got to do that day. While they were having a rest because it a really HUGE day.

THE END......

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