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Friday 1 November 2013

Halloween.

                                             WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

Launching onto the couch I waited for people to knock on the door, a huge knock came by the door as I was walking towards it. As I rushed to open the door two little boys came by and shouted trick                or treat I said sorry we have no candy to give out.  I waited and waited for people to come by our front step as I waited I just fell a sleep and kids keep knocking on our door. 
            

1 comment:

  1. Good Job Asena,
    You really did show not tell. So did you ENJOY Halloween? I did but I sort of got annoyed of the knocking but I still did open the door. Awesome!!

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