Camp Bentzon Presentation.

As you see this is my presentation of the us Year 6's going to Kawau Island I hope you enjoy and leave some feed back.

Camp Bentzon.

Next week on Tuesday we are going to Kawau Island for our special camp. I can't wait to play all these fun and cool games like Volley Ball, Orienteering, Abb sailing, Kayaking, Rock climbing and sport. The most thing I am looking forward for camp is when we get to swim and play with our freinds and hang  around.

Athletics

Last Friday it was the school Athletics on our school field it was really cool because we got to do lots of sport like High Jump, Shot put, Triple jump, 75m 100m sprint, Javilen, soft ball throw and disscus it was really fun because we got to go with our freinds.

The first activity we did was Shot put it was really hard because the shot put was really heavy to hold and I keep throwing it not pushing it. My friend Meleane came 1st, Mua came 2nd and Jordenne came 3rd that was shot out and it was cool to watch.

After shot put we went to high jump it was really bad because I hate high is because I am really not that good at high jump only my freinds are. When I was ready to jump I was telling jennifer to come to the front because I was scared that I might miss it as I ran I made it so I had to sit in the middle.

                                                            To be continued....

Touch Tournament.

Yesterday three teams went to the touch tournament and it was really cool because my friends went but the sad thing that I was in a different team I was in the red team and Iron, Jordenne, Ata and Meleane.  They were in the Black team and it was really boring because I was hanging out with them. The team that was there was Tamaki Primary, Glen Taylor, St Pius, Bailey Road, Stan Hope and  Stone Cold.

At the touch tournament my team called the red team played five games the first team we versed was Stan Hope it was a really cool game but in the last minute Stan Hope school made the try and it was one to them and 0 to us. 

In every game I was always the starting seven it was really cool so I can sub when I am tired in the field there are three girls and four boys and it was really cool. The starting seven was Emmy, Dj, Me, Leka, Byron, Collin and Paula. Me and Collin stand out on the wing and the others stay in the middle. 

Our game was really cool and fun because playing touch was really amazing because I just like running and tagging the person with the ball. When I got the ball I just pass it back to that person that pass me the ball because I don't like running with the ball. We won three games, drew one lost one and then we had to play who is going to come 3rd and It was equal with Tamaki Primary. 

Writing Test Narrative.

Planning:

Characters Ben , Mike, Simon and sam.

The problem is that it looks to old and they need to plant some flowers.

It solved that some people come and help Mike, Ben Simon and Sam plant.

Start Writing Here:

I heard a whisper but no one was there a person was whispering but they didn’t know who it was because they couldn't see that person that was whispering. When the person was whispering they thought it was a bird but it was not a bird it was a person but the won’t there.

That person  was whispering to loud that Ben, Mike, Sam and Simon could hear them from outside because they were talking about something about that they need to built the shed but they  need some people to come and help plant some flowers around the shed cause the shed is really old.

Ben, Mike, Simon and Sam needed to think because they are going to do a big job by looking for some people to come and help them plant some flowers around the shed. While they are looking for some People to come and help they upset that they might not find anyone at all.

Mike and Sam are really sad because they might not get any people to help them get the shed well done and clean up because they can’t find any one at all. As they were sad they just said to them self we can do this by our self becauses we can’t find any one at all so lets do this our self.

As they finish pulling the grass, taking out old things from the shed, painting the shed and getting new fence they had some rest for tomorrow because they have to take down the shed and built it again lots of things got to do that day. While they were having a rest because it a really HUGE day.

Mike, Sam, Ben and Simon woke up at 5:00 o'clock in the morning  because they had to do a lot of things to get done they worked and worked as hard as they could as they were working they heard something coming from the other side of the shed they walked closer and closer it was a truck it was crashing down the shed.I heard a whisper but no one was there a person was whispering but they didn’t know who it was because they couldn't see that person that was whispering.

That person  was whispering to loud that Ben, Mike, Sam and Simon could hear them from outside because they were talking about something about that they need to built the shed but they  need some people to come and help plant some flowers around the shed cause the shed is really old.

Ben, Mike, Simon and Sam needed to think because they are going to do a big job by looking for some people to come and help them plant some flowers around the shed. While they are looking for some People to come and help they upset that they might not find anyone at all.

Mike and Sam are really sad because they might not get any people to help them get the shed well done and clean up because they can’t find any one at all. As they were sad they just said to them self we can do this by our self becauses we can’t find any one at all so lets do this our self.

As they finish pulling the grass, taking out old things from the shed, painting the shed and getting new fence they had some rest for tomorrow because they have to take down the shed and built it again lots of things got to do that day. While they were having a rest because it a really HUGE day.

THE END......

Halloween.

                                             WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

Launching onto the couch I waited for people to knock on the door, a huge knock came by the door as I was walking towards it. As I rushed to open the door two little boys came by and shouted trick                or treat I said sorry we have no candy to give out.  I waited and waited for people to come by our front step as I waited I just fell a sleep and kids keep knocking on our door.