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Friday 2 November 2012

Charlie and the chocolate factory

Charlie was walking home, he saw a gold coin and decided to go and buy him a wonka Bar.


He was eating without stopping because he was very hungry that the shopkeeper said “Don’t eat a lot because  you might get a stomach ache.”

Finishing of his 1st bar of chocolate, Charlie said to the shopkeeper, “Can I have another bar for Grandpa Joe?” He went outside and heard the people saying that the fifth golden ticket was a fake. So he went and saw the newspaper for himself.

Charlie was walking slowly to a quiet place where he opened his Grandpa’s chocolate bar. He carefully and slowly opened it and there he saw the golden ticket. Charlie was so happy. As he was holding it up, until a lady came and grabbed Charlie’s hand and said “He’s found it!”

People were surrounding Charlie because they wanted the golden ticket. The people were trying to get it of him but Charlie was just holding it tight it in his hands.

When Charlie got the ticket he ran as fast as he could to tell his Grandpa Joe.


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