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Monday, 29 October 2012

Asena picture 1

Finn is 14 years old. He was meeting his friends at the park but they didn’t come so Finn decided to swing while he was waiting for them to turn up.
While he was swinging he jumped off the swing and hit his leg on the tree as he jumped.

What happened next? Well, Finn fell in front of and the people, they were laughing at him and didn’t go and help him, even when his leg was hurting badly.

After everyone left Finn just lying on the ground,  a friendly kid came and helped Fin get up with his brother Jimmy. They took him home which was lucky, as Finn had twisted his leg.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Asena,
    I like your narrative about a boy who went to the park and fell over in front of people.

    From: Emmy in room 14.

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