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Thursday 28 March 2013

Asena the smelly Parite.


The name of my Parite is jack  because he hangs around the jungle island and he is not nice to other people.


I Pirate jack was really yucky and ugly because I had rip clothes and black teeth which no one didn't even want to talk to me at all.  I had long hair that was really messy and flies keep buzzing around my hair.



“Arrr What are you doing with my treasure you smelly old scoundrel. “Arrrr give back my treasure Asena pirate said or else I will go and find my own treasure that is  really better and real gold. “THAT IS JUST FAKE GOLD”!!!.


Walking down the river I saw a flash boat,  that a box was sticking out I thought what it was until I saw a gold coin flashing through the window so I quickly ran and  grabbed the treasure and off I go.

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1 comment:

  1. Hey asena,
    what a amazing pirate story you have there I liked how your pirate was name jack and that it lives in a jungle and its bad. Keep up the awesome work.

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