WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.
Launching onto the couch I waited for people to knock on the door, a huge knock came by the door as I was walking towards it. As I rushed to open the door two little boys came by and shouted trick or treat I said sorry we have no candy to give out. I waited and waited for people to come by our front step as I waited I just fell a sleep and kids keep knocking on our door.
